Really like how it starts out ambient and gets more rhythm-based, turning the uncertain atmosphere into a curious, if slightly unsettling one. And a guitar and piano addition? Very nice!
Only real critique i have is that the central drum machine doesn't quite match up with the rest of the song for me, though that may just be personal taste. Otherwise, well done!
Thank you for your Words!
The drums are the oldest part of the track, remaining mostly unchanged from 3 years ago (they also sample from the original song 5 years ago), thought it sounded cute, so kept it :3
This song is a bookmark of my musical journey, I think I might start a ritual of remaking it every few years.
You always make the most wonderful ambient pieces.
Thank you so much for your support. 🙏
I'm extremely impressed at the level of production and arrangement that went into this piece. I was originally going to critique the song, but I realized that this is a cover, so that won't do you much good. xD
Anyways, well done!
Nice! I enjoyed the lo-fi feel from this – the drums and synths mesh well together. Some variety in melodic/chord progression would've been interesting, but as an atmospheric piece, it's really cool. :)
thank you heaps, i didn't feel like going all in on this one melody/chords wise, i kinda just wanted to open up the daw, dick about and finish a track in the space of around half an hour or so (as i've been doing a lot lately) nonetheless glad you liked it :)
At first it was a rocking track, then the orchestration, my god! How did you manage to get that section? Well done!
Very creative production choices here! It feels more like a soundscape that a song happens to exist within, and I enjoyed it all the way through. Well done!
Very peaceful and well put-together. The video-game synths mixed in with the field recordings and lo-fi beat to put together something simple yet earnest. A volume adjustment may be in order, but the quietness certainly adds to it. Well done! :)
why thank you so much! i agree about the volume, there’s parts that definitely need to shine more but some parts make up for others i guess, the field recording aspect was a blast though and doing it just works flawlessly with the type of stuff that i make even if i did record it with my phone lol, but thank you a bunch for the honesty and kind words :)
A nice lil jam and a productive, positive use of frustrated energies. :)
thanks for listening!
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Empty Motel Part Two 
FD - Afterglow 
Ferriswheel 
Hardly harshly 
Blank Space 
A variety of turbines 
that date went fucking awful and i just need some catharsis 
