Really cool effect!
Wow! Really great job! Love the use of sound effects to tell the story. Keep it up! :)
Thank you so much! ^_^
I loved doing this the old school way, it was both easier and harder than digital animation, what i was really worried about was the sound, i dont have much experience making a soundtrack, but thank you for thinking its not bad :D
Pretty good job! I kind of see the style you're going for now. Not much else to say, except I liked the use of sound effects but still kind of wished it was longer. Either way, good job!
Thanks a bunch for checking it out! Hopefully my work flow will get faster and allow me to make longer episodes. Much appreciation for the feedback!!
Really good work! Loved the animation and the storyline as well. Keep it up! :)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
Wow! Really motivational story. And excellent animation to add! The only thing I would suggest is working on recording audio (that background noise tho). Besides that, great job! :)
I WANNA BUY A NICE MIC SO BAD! but i gotta save up :(
... and clear out my closet so i have an audio booth XD
Thanks for the feedback yo!
Not too bad! Really good animation work! I feel that the problem was that it was too short and without any context. If you could work on developing a story, I think these could be really good. I wish you luck! :)
Thank you! The second one we'll be putting out later is a little longer and a better representation of what the series is (animated podcast). However, since we're a bit out of practice with animation and audio editing, we wanted the first video to be short and simple. It was good practice and helped me find a lot of weak points in my work flow. That being said, yeah, there's very little context.
Thanks for the words of encouragement and constructive criticism. I really appreciate the feedback!!
Good job! I really liked the animation and the story. I felt that it could've been longer, or at least the intro could've been shorter, but either way I like it! :)
Thanks for the feedback! It's really good to have nice constructive criticism. It all goes to making me a much better animator/artist/storyteller. I'm glad that you liked it.
Nice animation work! I felt like the jokes could've used some work, but I think it was about what I expected. Overall, great job! :)
Thank you for your feedback. Much appreciated!
Pretty good job! Overall funny and very clever concept. The audio quality and smoothness of the animation need some work, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. Keep it up! :)
Hey thanks littlbox for the watch and the critic! I will defiantly get to work on embellishing the roughness.
Nice job! It's always great to see good stick figure animations on here.
There were a couple places where the scene could've been brighter, because all the darks blended together and it was hard to tell what was happening. Besides that, great job!
I hope you're as happy with this as you were when you started 3 years ago. :)
thank you for the positive feedback,
yea i think you are right about the colors in some scenes :/
and yea i'm happy with it :)
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